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Moonlight Path Chapter 1

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A black she-cat runs through a forest her mind whirling. Her shoulder hurts as she runs; her breath was ragged as she ran. She broke through some ferns and tumbles down a small ravine side. She rests for a moment before pulling herself up, running through some bramble bushes breaking through into a clearing. She notices cats were gathered near the highrock. She sees the blue-gray fur of the leaders on the highrock. The she-cat ran over to them.

"Ravenpaw?" the leader questions, "where's Redtail and Tigerclaw?"

"Redtail… Redtail is dead," Ravenpaw chokes out, gasps were heard all over but Ravenpaw didn't care. Her vision blurs before going dark. She drops to the ground with a soft thud.



Ravenpaw woke in a nest that was in a small clearing with a small cave near. Other empty nest lay near Ravenpaw. A beautiful, dark tortoiseshell she-cat with a distinctive dapple coat walks over to her with some herbs.

"Eat these," she murmurs as she places the bundle of herbs down. Ravenpaw shifts in her nest to get easy access to the herbs and gulp them done stopping for a moment to make a face.

"Ugh… That was nasty," She mutters as she sweeps her tongue over her muzzle.

"But it'll make you healthy. You may go but no training, patrol, or hunting for three sunrises,"

"Yes Spottedleaf," Ravenpaw stood up, but before she moves any further; a dark brown shape bolts into the clearing.

"Ravenpaw! How you feeling?" the dark brown tabby tom asks, his amber eyes gleaming with concern and sadness.

"Dustpaw I'm ok. Spottedleaf told me I can leave but can't train or anything for three sunrises,"

"That's good, maybe you can clean the Queens Den then," Dustpaw jokes.

"Humph… You just don't want to do it," Ravenpaw snaps back playfully.

"Guess what," Dustpaw sobers up

"What happen?" Ravenpaw sighs knowing that Dustpaw can sometimes get in trouble

"I did nothing but Bluestar let a kittypet join as an apprentice," Dustpaw spats out the word kittypet.

"Really?" Ravenpaw asks shock. "He can't be that bad for a kittypet then,"

"Yeah, but he's still a kittypet," Dustpaw mutters to his sister. A beautiful, pale ginger she-cat walks up to them muttering something.

"Did you tell Ravenpaw about the fight?" She asks glancing at Dustpaw who shook his head.

"What fight, Sandpaw?"

"The kittypet and Longtail fought, the kittypet was lucky that his collar snapped when it did or else he would be dead," Sandpaw meows

"Yeah but Firepaw left his mark on Longtail also," a gray tom joins them with a slightly smaller handsome ginger tom with a flame-color coat. "Ravenpaw this is Firepaw, the kittypet. Firepaw this is Ravenpaw I was telling you about."

"Nice to meet you Firepaw, don't mind Dustpaw and Sandpaw they don't like outsiders," She smiles at him, her blue eyes gleaming with hidden excitement until they land on a dark brown tabby tom. "When did Tigerclaw get back?" She asks no one, as fear creeping in her voice.

"A few minutes after you past out," Graypaw answers, "Why?"

"Nothing, I guess I should go tell – " Ravenpaw stops and saw Spottedleaf pads softly up to the large tom and whispers something. Tigerclaw growls but nodes glaring over at Ravenpaw's direction. "Never mind,"

"What's the matter?" Firepaw spoke for the first time.

"Like you want to know," Dustpaw sneered as he pushes his sister towards the Apprentice Den. Murmuring softly as he did, "you need to rest lets get you some sleep, Sandpaw can you get Ravenpaw a squirrel?" Sandpaw nods and race over towards the fresh-kill pile picking up a plump squirrel and heads towards the Apprentice Den.

"Sorry about that, Dustpaw and Sandpaw are just grumpy. Ravenpaw is a lot better without Dustpaw and Sandpaw around."

"I imagine so,"
Warriors (c) Erin Hunter
Lineart (c) Wild Path of ShadowClan
color (c) Me

This is pretty much an AU where Ravenpaw is a female and she gets with Firepaw/Rusty. going to follow the books slightly. the only pairing that will be the same will be GrayxSilver the rest from Dustpaw down will all have different mates.

I also want Dustpaw and Ravenpaw be closer sister and brother in this story.

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Yayz! :D Sry it took me so long 2 comment...i read , and then i kind of 4got about commention. This is awesome! I'm pretty sure Ravenpaw has green eyes, but whatever. I like how u made Raven and Dust closer siblings than they rly were. FirexRaven is cute already <3